I'm already finding many uses for the ((revision)) macro, and these examples just further illustrate it's usefulness. I'm making use of it in this way (which is slightly different to previous examples in that I put the 'link' prior to the text change):

You were up late. Too late. ((revise lastnight "Thinking back")), last night seemed a good idea...((cycle lastnight))it was only a few drinks at the bar.((becomes))you stayed up late with your study group.((becomes))you watched a late night movie.((endcycle))

So basically, it allows the player to change elements of the story by clicking specific elements in the text related to the change. I think it would be a nice addition to the macro if the clickable/link element of the macro could also change. It can be achieved via the revert function if you only want to change the clickable/link element twice i.e.

You see
((revision gender))
((set $gender = "male" ; $him = "him" ; $he = "he" ; $his = "his"))
((becomes))((set $gender = "female" ; $him = "her" ; $he = "she" ; $his = "her"))
((endrevision))
((revise gender "a guy"))
((revert gender "a girl")) looking back at you.

but it'd be nice if that could be unlimited for the clickable part of the macro. So for example:

((revise colour "blue" "yellow" "black"))
You paint the wall ((cycle colour)) a light shade of blue.((becomes))a garish shade of yellow((becomes))black. Just plain black.((endcycle))

I guess allowing a variable in the ((revise x $variable)) line would also allow people to achieve a similar thing. :)

EDIT: Awesome - I see the changes have been implemented. :) I love the flexibility of this macro, as it allows the reader to make many tweaks in passage without having to navigate away from it. No idea if you were going to implement the changes anyway (would make sense given your cyclinglink macro) but many thanks!