the voice that reads the words on the screen and lives in my head especially likes this, as it gave her a chance to change the tone of a sentence repeatedly and read it with some humor.
i also just now realized that the voice in my head changes depending on who i assume the author of what i'm reading is - somehow i assumed that all of this was written by a woman (i have no idea except for the poem) and so it was all read by a woman in my mind.
anyway this is the most interesting of the interactions poems so far, IMO
Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you liked it. Most of the stuff up to this point has been small stuff "without semantic content", and that was partially to make myself make things in twine, and partially to jump-start my creativity for longer works--as far as Interaction Poems go, I'm probably going to start creating larger works.
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i like this. the voice that
i like this.
the voice that reads the words on the screen and lives in my head especially likes this, as it gave her a chance to change the tone of a sentence repeatedly and read it with some humor.
i also just now realized that the voice in my head changes depending on who i assume the author of what i'm reading is - somehow i assumed that all of this was written by a woman (i have no idea except for the poem) and so it was all read by a woman in my mind.
anyway this is the most interesting of the interactions poems so far, IMO
nice!
I like this one!
and most of it the way TheCube's comment could affect my experience of it!
Thanks for the kind words!
Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you liked it. Most of the stuff up to this point has been small stuff "without semantic content", and that was partially to make myself make things in twine, and partially to jump-start my creativity for longer works--as far as Interaction Poems go, I'm probably going to start creating larger works.
Ah, this is wonderful! Very
Ah, this is wonderful! Very fitting to my approach style of putting in ridiculous quotations around random words. I love it.