It has a little replay value, and I really like the art! It has that extreme feel without too much extravagance. I'm feeling like the characters should squiggle but that's probably just the rotoscope/squigglevision mentality talking. I know how q&a objects pause the universe so there's that. You seem to have a keen adeptness to using tons of them and it works well here. So many branches and tangles and it tells a short story. It's a goood so congratulations. I don't know what steps i'd take to make it g000d or or just goo0d but it's all about experimenting and finding your device to be rotary and stuff.

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